Max’s Musings: Vulnerable Poe

How does a poet write with vulnerability?

American writer Edgar Allen Poe is most known for his horror stories embedded with suspense and unforeseen thrills. With grim short stories like “The Masque of the Red Death”, “The Fall of the House of Usher”, and “The Tell-Tale Heart” among others, Poe secured his place with the rest of legendary horror writers.

In addition to short stories, Poe found his calling in the realm of poetry. With classics like “The Raven” and “Annabel Lee” standing among his most famous poems, Poe seemingly and eloquently duels both forms.

For this week. I wanted to choose a poem that I have not been exposed to before. I’m hoping it’s new for you as well. I selected “Deep in Earth”, written in 1847, for discussion due to its simplicity yet deep sense of open vulnerability.

“Deep in Earth”

Deep in earth my love is lying

And I must weep alone.

When I first read “Deep in Earth”, I wondered why I felt drawn to such a short poem and pondered how I was going to reflect on said piece. After sitting with it and rereading it, I realized the direction I wanted to take.

“Deep in Earth” embodies a genuine vulnerability that supersedes all other feelings. At the base of it, it’s about one individual mourning the loss of their lover. The mix of love and loss leaves the reader conflicted on how to feel. Do they feel sorrow for the lover left alone in life or feel glad that they were fortunate enough to find love in life?

It takes true talent that only gifted and skillful writers possess to be able to write a heartfelt snapshot and still be able to leave their readers feeling emotionally wrecked and wandering in hazy thoughts. There is pure artistry when it comes to being a minimalist writer.

holding up book: Edgar Allan Poe, Complete Tales and Poems

Complete Tales and Poems, by Edgar Allan Poe

The Evergreen Echo

It is writing like this that continues to inspire my own. It’s not always about writing the longest or the most epic poem of the century. Sometimes, it just takes one emotion or thought dipped in sheer vulnerability to achieve the same effect or desire.

During a creative writing workshop, I remember getting a critique from another classmate. They told me I was not vulnerable enough. The comment left me puzzled and perplexed. Thinking I gave the poem all I had, I wondered if I didn’t have what it took to achieve what I wanted to as a writer and a poet.

After further reflection, I learned how vulnerability looks and feels different to everyone, regardless of their willingness to share it. What may appear as scratching the surface for one could be asking a lot for someone else.

Vulnerability can simply mean taking part in something different or unexpected. While being most known as a horror writer, writing love poems may not have been so easy for Poe’s audiences to digest. Although it is important to keep one’s audience in mind, a writer must write for themselves first.

As a diehard fan of Poe’s literary works, I find this piece refreshing from his normal grotesque way with language. He may know how to spin a classic horror story, but Poe’s innate ability to interlace love within a piece still astounds and astonishes me.

Poe’s writing heavily influenced my own in many distinct ways. Growing up and not finding it easy to fit in, I found it easy to submerge myself in the macabre and the gothic. Poe was one of a handful of writers that encouraged me to tackle the medium for myself. His poem is a fine example of branching out from what a person knows while still staying true to their writing roots.

Life never goes as planned while offering unexpected losses and victories. It is through said life that a poet gains the opportunity to convey vulnerability. A poet expresses vulnerability through practice while experiencing and adapting through life’s challenges and championships.

Will you follow suit?  

Maxwell Meier

(he/him) Writing has always been cathartic and therapeutic for Maxwell. He enjoys spreading his creativity through a multitude of mediums like poetry, art, and photography. Maxwell earned his bachelor’s degree in English from the University of Texas at San Antonio. He served as a poetry editor and managing editor for the college’s literary arts journal, The Sagebrush Review. Maxwell moved to Seattle, Washington at the beginning of March of 2024 with his boyfriend. When he is not reading or writing, Maxwell enjoys watching Friends, listening to Oh Wonder, or hunting for Funko Pops. He hopes to unearth the hidden gems that lie within our vast city. 

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